Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Attempt #1



Yep, I'd like to write a book.  But I figured that before I penned my first novel, I should start small.  Poetry.  Here's my first few attempts.  Be sure to let me know what you think!

Attempt 1:
Roses aren't always red.
Violets are purple not blue.
I've had a really long week.
How about you?

Attempt 2:
Pat a cake, pat a cake, army man.
Get this deployment over with as fast as you can.

Attempt 3:
Star light, too bright.
I really need some sleep tonight.
I'm making a wish with all my might
that Robitussin cures my cough tonight.

After re-reading them, I may have to reconsider the book thing.  But then again, maybe a little dose of honesty and reality might go a long way.  Or maybe, I should wait and try again next week.  You never know what I could come up with then!



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